dot tw yor fon naB to az pel yor prevt i dot tl ozar pelo wer I liv.
Don't tell your phone number to other people your private I don't tell other people where I live.
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, June 22, 2018
10 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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hi my name is Jesse I like you slide because it has a lot of pic and the people look cool the people look nice too
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Deletehi y name is Tom and I like your slides because you have said that one person want someones phone number and the other person said no.
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Deletehi Lina hi hi hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@@@!!!!!!!!
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ReplyDeletelina you are doing good
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Niamh I like how you made it easy to understand and I like you were sensible with your slide. It tells me that I should stop telling private information.
ReplyDeleteHello Niamh,thank you for your kind comment. I have learnt all about private information and know when I should share it and not.
DeleteHi Lina. I like how you added what not to share that is private information. I learnt that I am not aloud to share. I learnt lots of private information in this project. Maybe next time you could work on your spelling and add more detail. Was it hard or easy to make this project?
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